its a nice thing expressing feelings about persons living alone for studies and all, but i felt it bit depressing we enjoy some lighter jiffies too you should write about those too that will make ur poetry better.
@Onkar: No one enjoys staying away from home and family (there may b people who do, who knows!!). I agree with you, we do enjoy lighter moments too in our everyday life... but then that is the mood of the poem.
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its a nice thing expressing feelings about persons living alone for studies and all,
ReplyDeletebut i felt it bit depressing
we enjoy some lighter jiffies too
you should write about those too
that will make ur poetry better.
ratings 7/10
Again, Beautiful ...
ReplyDeletethanks guys.. :)
ReplyDelete@Onkar: No one enjoys staying away from home and family (there may b people who do, who knows!!). I agree with you, we do enjoy lighter moments too in our everyday life... but then that is the mood of the poem.